- WRT Academic Writing
Academic Writing Feedback/Notes: There are 3 different sources in that one sample
paragraph and they are woven together with clarity and concise writing. As you work to
workshop and draft your Research Essay for this class (and any others beyond this
course), note the following for your own academic writing:
● Begin paragraphs with your own idea. How will your sources support or further your
essay if you don’t begin with your own material, as shown here?
● Introduce your sources as you use them in your writing, offering 2-3 pieces of
identifying information (author, title, and publication). This provides a context to
your readers on how the sources connect to your topic, as well as what source
you’re referencing. You don’t want to lose readers because they don’t know what
source is speaking when – or question who someone is based only on the in-text
● Quote or summarize/paraphrase relative material – that is, work to move away from
the idea that you’re citing just to cite; just to meet a quota or a guideline. Check
your work: Why are you citing this source? What idea does it connect with and have
you made it clear to your readers what connection is?
● Use transition words/phrases to connect sources – if they agree, use verbs that
agree. If they disagree, use verbs that disagree. If they’re neutral, use neutral verbs.
(See link in Week 6 on “verbs to synthesize sources” to help)
● End paragraphs/sections with your own ideas. What do these sources allude to, and
what is your next idea (transition)?
When you’re satisfied with the sources you’ve chosen, take some time to see where they
should be placed for the best synthesis. Happy Writing!
Find: The different sources, and the synthesis words. Identify writer analysis.
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