Critical Analysis Essay
I attached my draft. Improve the paper and add 2 more pages to it
The total pages needed are 3-4 plus the cover page and reference page which I do not need help with.
I have already written 2 pages. The project needs to be 3-4 pages total
Go ahead and do 2 pages. I know it needs some editing and rewriting to make it better. My instructor had stated that I needed to use more of my own voice in the body of the paper and that the body of my paper needed to support my thesis.